Friday, January 30, 2015

Red Crane (Flamingo) by Xin Mu, The Swan by FS Flint

Red Crane (Flamingo)
by Xin Mu (1943-)

One flamingo descends
one red bloom is planted on the lake;
A flock of flamingo descend
the whole lake is covered by red blooms.

One flamingo ascends
slits a bleeding wound in the sky;
A flock of flamingo ascend
the sky bleeds a blood river.

Original Chinese poem:
红鹤
辛牧(1943-

一只红鹤落下
在湖里插上一朵红花
一群红鹤落下
在湖里插上整湖红花

一只红鹤飞起
在天空划开一道伤口
一群红鹤飞起
天空便血流成河

also reminds another great poem

The Swan
by Mr. FS Flint

Under the lily shadow
and the gold   
and the blue and mauve                 
that the whin and the lilac     
pour down on the water,        
the fishes quiver.        

Over the green cold leaves    
and the rippled silver         
and the tarnished copper       
of its neck and beak,  
toward the deep black water 
beneath the arches,    
the swan floats slowly.                   

Into the dark of the arch the swan floats      
and the black depth of my sorrow     
bears a white rose of flame.

The Swan more color and emotional, Flamingo is simple.